Mismo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Improv Taco Bomb-AW]

This is really bad.

But that is what makes it even more funny. Everything is bad, the sound (of course), the animation, the plot. But goddamn it is funny because of that.

AcreHill responds:

mission FUCKIN ACCOMPLISHED THEN.

[Zelda: Adulthood]

Great

Even the hero of time must worry about his taxes. Loved the biggaron swords joke on the back of the porno magazine.

[the Internet Pals]

Totally made my day

You've captured to characteristics of all the communities so good, and the final punchline made me laugh so hard. I got to give it to you that you know how to do your thing, your animation is always great, your voice acting is awesome and your humour always make me laugh.

What can I say I love what you do, and this flash is no exception. So keep up the good work, and I hope you might come up sequel to this, not that is necessary but I would love to see more.

[Scott Cole]

That was weird

Fairly decent animation, good voice acting. But the comedy, was weird and I don't know why I keep smiling.

[Snack Time!!]

Slow pacing

I know this is your first submission to newgrounds, so I'll tell you what I thought was good and what I think you could improve if you were to make more flashes for newgrounds. First of what was good, the animation isn't great but I can see that you've have at least taken your time to get the animation as good as possible for yourself, you might not be a freaking artist but so aren't many people here newgrounds. Animation skills is something that will most like improve with time, no matter if you're an art student.

But what you could improve is pacing. It felt like forever before something actually really happened, and since you only based this flash on one joke it felt drawn out.

Also what was the joke, it was hard tell what you were even saying. I don't know if this because you're not that good of a voice actor or you just don't have a microphone that is good for recording. Anyway hard to know what you said.

RedMage583 responds:

:D Well, least some people think I'm improving! Yes, I know it will take sometime before I start getting more acquainted with drawing w/ a tablet Versus Pen/Paper (Couldn't even figure out how to start the tablet's program -_-) before I can start matching my animations to my artwork. Not to mention having to learn the programs within flash, such as tweening, buttons, ect.

Yeah, it was supposed to be a bit of a stupid "dramatic" zoom in. Sort of like to throw people of of what was actually happening.

The joke was.... gah. No spoilers D: OK, the voice quality was crap. I'm going to shorten the zoom in a bit, but once I get around to either fixing the voice acting or adding subtitles, hopefully people understand it.

EDIT: Fixed the voice quality :D

[Halo-ODST : The Last Hope]

Although not perfect, really good.

I'm not going to lie, the animation wasn't perfect but it is much better than anything else I usually see here on newgrounds. Also the plot and the story is weak, but Halo doesn't really need a plot, it is basically shoot some aliens, blow shit up and save the day and you capture that very well in this flash. So overall I think it was great, and I'm glad tha t people like you are still submitting things like this which you've actually been working on, and not just thrown together.

But one thing that would have made it a little better than it already is, is that you could have put in some sound effects. The music is really good for building up a good atmosphere, but if add gun shot noise when the main hero is firing his weapon, well that would have made this truly awesome.

[Bunni:World's End (Promo)]

Looks pretty cool

Animation seems alright, and the build up so far have been interesting, so I hope you will eventually as you promise submit what I guess will be the first part of an epic saga.

[donkey kong real life]

A bit entertaining

While the final punchline is funny there is nothing much else to this. Sure I could that you could improve some things, but that wouldn't make the flash in its wholesome better. One thing you could have done is to not have this made into a loop, rather annoying hearing the punchline like a thousands time before I've written this review finished.

[Moonwalk]

Did you just jump the shark?

Because that was I thought for the second half of the flash, "Did he just jump the shark in one flash". I liked the first half of it though, how it was dark and moody felt liked this could be the start of a good story, but then action scenes just threw me of.

The flash seems Michael Bay-ish, building up a nice setting with interesting characters and just throw a bunch of action sequences in there because?(!)

Otherwise, well animated and the music fits well into all scenes whatever it is dark moody drama or high packed action.

[Clock Face]

Sorry buddy

What can be said, everything about it is made badly. I've seen similar things but even they were better than this.

oliverscottbrown responds:

Thanks for the review. I was just doing a test. I didn't program anything. I just tweaked the clock from a pre-made one using Games Factory 2 Newgrounds Edition.